I think that what you wrote was very reasonable. But, what about 
this? what if you were to write a killer 
post title? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how 
to run your blog, however suppose you added something to possibly get a person's attention? I mean blog topic is a little vanilla.
You could glance at Yahoo's home page and note how they write news headlines to get 
viewers to open the links. You might add a video or a 
pic or two to get people excited about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it might bring your posts a little livelier.