Throughout this great design of things you secure  an A for effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually misplaced everybody was on your specifics. As they say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more accurate here. Having said that, let me tell you just what did give good results. Your writing is definitely rather powerful and that is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, despite the fact that I can easily notice the leaps in logic you come up with, I am not really sure of how you appear to unite the details that help to make the final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your position but wish in the future you actually link your dots better.