In this great scheme of things you actually get  an A+ just for effort and hard work. Where you confused everybody was first in the particulars. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more true at this point. Having said that, let me reveal to you precisely what did work. Your writing is definitely really convincing and that is probably why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, although I can easily see a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not convinced of how you appear to connect the points which produce the conclusion. For right now I shall subscribe to your point but hope in the future you link the dots much better.