Wow! You sure are learning fast. You are better at this than half our native speaker high school students. A few confused "а" and "я"-s, a couple of typos and only one... членуване (I don't know how it's in English) error. It should be "В хола има..." instead of "В холът има...". And that's something a lot of people just can't seem to get right. And I mean grown-ups with university degrees.
I think you have found a very good tutor and you're also a great student. Keep up the good work! (At that rate, you'll be teaching Bulgarian by Christmas)