Well done! Yes, the excitement is there, most notably in the sentences with the exclamation marks.
But "Аз искам да видим всичко" could be correct, depends on what you wanted to say. If it was "I want to see it all" - then Elena is right, it should be видЯ. But if it was "I want US to see it all" - then it's correct.
You could still lose all the "аз" and "ние" and it will be perfectly OK. Like in the sentences "Ще посетим..." and "Няма да мислим...".

But apparently you've learned a lot in both grammar and vocabulary. Kudos to you and your teacher :)

Oh, also, a shorter way to say "Ще правя много снимки" (not that it's incorrect) is "Ще снимам много".