Good effort!

My advice: you could actually do without any of those many 'аз' you place in everywhere, it sounds more natural :) (in the first sentence it's ok since you introduce the topic, but from then on you should try avoiding repetitions)   Since the 'I' is actually 'coded' in the verb that follows, it only makes the phrase heavier if you add the personal pronoun before that verb. In Bulgarian you pretty much only say 'аз' when you want to particularly emphasize that it's you, not anybody else

Oh and Elena is actually wrong, names of the days of the week and months are not spelled with a capital letter, unlike many other languages.