You had some good things to say in this essay. Many people liked his work but many people have been influenced by Aristotle:
Alexander the Great, Al-Farabi, Avicenna, Averroes, Albertus Magnus, Maimonides Copernicus, Galileo Galilei, Ptolemy, St. Thomas Aquinas, Ayn Rand, and most of Islamic philosophy, Christian philosophy, Western philosophy and Science in general

As well, Aristotle was influenced by Parmenides, Socrates, Plato, and Heraclitus. He did go to Plato's academy but Plato, himself, did not actually teach Aristotle as he was dead before Aristotle was born. 

A suggestion for part of your closing argument: " Aristotle's works influenced people like Thomas Aquinas, Ayn Rand and Alexander the Great and his words made an impact on Islamic philosophy, Christian philosophy, Western philosophy and Science in general." That's a lot of weight!

Also, I would like to volunteer to proof your next TCP. I don't think you had time to do that.