Throughout the awesome design of things you actually get  a B- just for hard work. Exactly where you lost me was first in your details. You know,  they say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more accurate right here. Having said that, allow me reveal to you what exactly did deliver the results. The article (parts of it) is definitely extremely persuasive and that is most likely the reason why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, although I can certainly see the leaps in reason you make, I am not sure of how you appear to connect the ideas which in turn make the conclusion. For now I will yield to your issue but hope in the future you connect your facts better.