In the grand pattern of things you actually secure  an A+ for effort. Exactly where you actually lost me personally was on your particulars. You know,  they say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be much more correct here. Having said that, permit me tell you precisely what did do the job. The article (parts of it) can be extremely persuasive and this is possibly why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, even though I can notice the leaps in logic you make, I am not necessarily certain of how you seem to connect the details which inturn make the final result. For the moment I shall subscribe to your position but trust in the foreseeable future you actually connect your facts much better.