Throughout the grand pattern of things you actually receive  a B- with regard to effort. Exactly where you confused me was on the particulars. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me tell you what exactly did give good results. The authoring is actually rather powerful and that is possibly why I am making the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, while I can easily see the jumps in logic you come up with, I am definitely not certain of just how you seem to connect your details that make the conclusion. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your issue but hope in the foreseeable future you connect the facts better.