Throughout the grand pattern of things you secure  a B+ just for effort and hard work. Where you misplaced me was first in the details. As it is said, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more accurate right here. Having said that, allow me inform you what exactly did work. Your article (parts of it) is actually really powerful which is possibly the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can easily see the jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not necessarily sure of just how you appear to unite the ideas which in turn help to make the actual final result. For now I will yield to your issue however trust in the foreseeable future you actually link your dots better.