In this grand scheme of things you'll get  an A+ just for hard work. Exactly where you confused me was in your details. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And it could not be more accurate at this point. Having said that, allow me tell you what exactly did do the job. The text is pretty persuasive and this is probably the reason why I am taking an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can easily notice a leaps in reason you make, I am not confident of just how you appear to unite the points which make the final result. For right now I will subscribe to your issue however hope in the future you link your dots much better.