Throughout the grand design of things you secure  a B+ with regard to effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost everybody ended up being on your details. As as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, allow me tell you just what exactly did work. The authoring is certainly very engaging and that is possibly the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, while I can see the jumps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily certain of just how you appear to unite the details which in turn help to make the conclusion. For right now I shall yield to your issue but hope in the foreseeable future you actually link your dots much better.