As always. 

Just because a cliched visual style is meant to complement a character's thought process doesn't mean it's working, doesn't mean it's not plain to see and really quite didactic. It's great that you can see all the things that a film-maker has tried to express, and frankly this one was so obvious who couldn't? but that doesn't mean any of it's working. 

The film doesn't need more editing, it needs more thought, it needs more writing, as with so many Australian films that get pushed into production before they're ready.