An important point. One of the steps in my editing, after the draft is done, is to print everything out and crash out on a couch with the manuscript and try not to have a pen in hand. The idea here is I'm trying to more closely simulate the experience of a reader, rather than the writer. Comfortable position, relaxed, reading for pleasure. If something really jumps out at me I'll mark it down, but mostly I'm trying to see what the reading experience is like, looking at things like pace.