Dear Kevin Gotkin:


We have read with great pleasure your submission to Archive. Your piece is going through two review cycles: first by an editor for clarity and content, and second by a copyeditor. You'll find attached a few suggestions from the first editor. Since they are mainly local suggestions, I have sent a word document with track changes. Could you review the document, accept/delete changes and make any other edits, and submit a revised version by 1/22/2012? 

I would also ask for you to submit captions for your three images, if you would like them to be captioned (simply labeling them Figure 1, 2, 3 -- as it stands now -- would also be fine).  Please be sure that any and all permissions or credits for the images is given in the caption.  If there is no permission or credit cited, then you are asserting that you hold the copyright to the image or that you use it by the terms of fair use. 

Lastly, please include a title if you would like one (again, not necessary but optional). 

Best,
Lauren
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